
All good things come to and end and the secret love between Julia and Winston come to a halt. When love is real, people will do anything to be with one another even if that means death as a consequence. Just like Romeo and Juliet, they are forbidden to be together but escape into their own world to love one another. Winston and Julia sneak away into a rented room where they can share their love without Big Brother watching....yet.
It's frustrating when two people love each other but can't be with each other in the open. All the media and movies influence what love should be like and how couples are always together showing of their affection to the world. When it's real love people don't care what others think and the power of love overcome any outside influence. Just like Winston and Julia and how they don't care that what there doing is wrong, regardless if they get caught. While in the rented room above Mr.Charringtons shop, Winston and Julia are reading Goldsteins book, when in a flash, they are caught. The start of a rebellious relationship ends and the torture begins.
Even though they both knew it would end at least they can say they spent memorable moments together. They lived their life to the fullest at that time and shared beautiful moments with each other. It's better to do what your heart desires and not let others influence your choice otherwise regret will be on your mind.
3 comments:
I like how you put your ideas togeher in the introduction.
In the concluson you really express what their "rebellious relationship meant to them."
It would be good if you expanded the body and included more ideas.
You have good grammar and spelling but there are some minor typos. Also I suggest that you expand your body paragraphs and put more detail in them. You have an effective grabber but the thesis is hard to find.
I believe you have a great grabber, and good ideas. Try to expand on your body and the great ideas you have.
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